He places his praetorium forward of proper position,

为了方便观赏预期的大胜
to better view anticipated victory.

他的大帐放得过于靠前
Perhaps we should pay visit,

或许我们应该去拜访他
and explain fatal error.

告诉他这一致命错误
Does not closer position suggest heavier guard surrounding praetorium?

大帐安置得这么靠前难道守军不会更多吗
The wind grows restless in advance of storm.

风暴到来之前狂风会吹个没完
By night's fall, it shall serve as cloak

待夜幕降临只要去的人不多
if our number is not swollen beyond intent.

我们就能神不知鬼不觉地摸进去
How many?

要多少人
Only the most skilled among us.

只要我们之中的精锐
We must strike as the serpent, fast and sure.

我们必须像毒蛇一样发起攻击又快又准
If Crassus falls to our venom,

如果克拉苏死在我们手下