来自《耶鲁大学开放课程：1945年后的美国小说 第2集 第2集》
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to make this change in his account.删改的部分 -
And what I have in front of you right now现在我给大家看的是 -
is the second page of the桃乐西·甘菲德·费希尔给赖特的 -
first letter that Dorothy Canfield Fisher wrote to Wright第一封信的第二页 -
where she first raises the problem that she sees当中她首次提到她在赖特修改的 -
in the ending as he has revised it.结尾中看到的问题 -
Now the shame here is that遗憾的是 -
she's talking about a version of the她说的是我们的版本上413页 -
ending you see你所看到的 -
in that note on 413 in our edition.那个结尾 -
She is talking about她说的是 -
an early draft of that ending,那个结尾的初稿