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Dead meat.
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Wow.
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You're really good at drawing.
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Like, better than any kid I've ever seen.
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Uh... Thanks.
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I wanna share this composition for two reasons.
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One, it uses adjectives well. And two,
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it's clear the author paid attention to what she saw and what she felt,
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which is important for any writing.
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Self-Contained Underwater Breathing Apparatus by Leslie Burke.
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Leslie, why don't you read it for us.
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Oh, man. Can you believe this?