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How so?
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First of all, the plot's a bit of a muddle, isn't it?
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Some of those jokes are awfully like the ones
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we did so much better hundreds of years ago
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in The Lady Vanishes.
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Also your villain is rather weak. Well he's very weak, in fact.
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But I think the big failure
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is the relationship between the heroine and the hero, you see.
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Probably if you weren't
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so smitten with your friend Whitfield Cook,
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you'd be able to see that, wouldn't you?
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But then I suppose