So I just went and wrote a special song.

所以我写了一首特别的歌
Han, I'd be happy to look at what you've written so far.

憨我很乐意过目下你的成果
I took music theory in college.

我大学的时候学过乐理
I once wrote an entire original musical

我曾以法国大革命为背景
based on the French revolution.

独家写了一整出音乐剧
Um, sorry to step on your nerd turf,

抱歉要踏入你们书呆的领域
but Les Mis is already a musical about the French revolution.

但关于法国大革命的音乐剧早有《悲惨世界》在先
Yes, but mine was from the point of view of the rich.

是啊但我的是从富人的角度出发
What are you going to rewrite next--

那你下一部要改写什么...
the musical Rent from the point of view of the landlord?

地主角度版的《吉屋出租》吗
Han, this is a lovely start, but--

憨开头不错但...
A lovely start?

开头不错