I... I'm proud of that story for two reasons.

我对这条故事线很满意

and it was meaningful and had some effect.

故事有意义 而且有一定影响

Well, uh, I did a lot of research, and she seems to be

我做了很多调查 似乎她是

Colleges want to get to know you.

大学想了解的是你

I need you to liaison with the parents.

我需要你去跟她们的父母交流一下

I don't think that's a good idea.

我不认为这是个好主意

I don't know about this, Meredith.

这样好吗 梅瑞迪丝

This is sort of my area of expertise.

这是我的专长

That you reminded her of President Adar when he ran for his first office.

你让她想起了刚执政时候的阿达尔总统

Don't let it go to your head. Adar was a moron.

别被这话冲昏了头脑 阿达尔是个白痴

The whole thing's structurally fine."

句子结构非常完整"

based on the message that's conveyed,

都是基于表达的信息内容